1). The pitch:
Youtube link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zS7ZPWWxeQs
2). Reflection: The majority of the feedback said that they
particularly enjoyed my passion and enthusiasm for the venture. The comments
were very positive and encouraging about continuing on the same path. A couple
people also noted that I made some good adjustments in becoming more organized
and deliberate with my speech overall. The feedback that surprised me the most
was how many people have noted professionalism in their comments. It is very
reassuring to hear others say it because it can feel awkward recording yourself
in a dorm room, so it is nice to know that I come off as knowledgeable about
the business concept. The only thing I slightly disagreed with was one comment
said my idea wasn’t completely unique because it relates to similar customer
needs from other ideas. I’m not entirely sure what they meant by this, but this
was the only comment with a criticism.
3). Changes from previous elevator pitches: I again tried to make
it slightly more casual and use more informal language. I kept a lot of the
same content because the comments were so positive. I tried to make this one
more conversational, but there are many similarities between this one and my
previous pitches. I also added more information about fresh produce and organic
options because that seemed popular with previous posts.
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